Once upon a time there was a kind girl called
Cinderella she was a nice girl but one day
A messenger came to the door
“There is going to be a ball at the palace”
The stepsisters gasped in excitement!
“May I go to the ball?”
“No you may not go to the ball!”
Cinderella cried.

by Ellie (Y3/4T)

Great writing Ellie. I love the word 'gasped!'