Descriptive Writing in Year 1

In year 1 today the children have been describing a picture. They had to work hard to think about what to write. Here is some of the children's work. What do you think?


'The trees are bare with no leaves. The house is giant, the house has got lots of windows. The bushes are bare and ugly. The snow covers the grass. The roof is covered with snow.
By Aleena


A big house. Big trees, lots of snow, lovely, fluffy clouds.
By Ellie


There is clouds like sheep. There is a big house. There are tress which are bare. There is a window.
By Amelia