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Friday 12 November 2010

Telescopic text

After looking again at the telescopic text website, Y45J have been creating their own extended sentences. Today, they started with 'George stirred his medicine'. Here is what some ended up with:
Yawningly, George stirred his ugly looking, horrific medicine.

George stirred his medicine and it was white as snow.

Yawning, I stirred the poisonous medicine, which was as deadly as a dart with a porcupine spike.

George quickly, stirred his gloomy, fabulous, brown, lumpy and sticky medicine,which was making a horrible stench as horrible as horse droppings and as green as bogeys.

George, as slowly as an elephant walking stirred his marvelous medicine.

Slowly, George suspiciously stirred his medicine, while glaring at his sick, old grandma.

George stirred his unbelievable medicine like crazy, in fact, he was mad like a maniac.

George gently stirred his magnificent, browny, icky, gloomy medicine, which tasted worse than mud and gone off bread.

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