Once upon a time there was a kind girl called
Cinderella she was a nice girl but one day
A messenger came to the door
“There is going to be a ball at the palace”
The stepsisters gasped in excitement!
“May I go to the ball?”
“No you may not go to the ball!”
by Ellie (Y3/4T)
Great writing Ellie. I love the word 'gasped!'
Friday, 30 November 2007
Thursday, 29 November 2007
Today lots of exciting activities were taking place in school; animation in Y5/6C, preparing for a puppet show in Y5P, collage art in Y3/4BN, digital image manipulation in Y3/4M and making model buildings (lit by electricity) in Y1/2F and S. In particular I was impressed by how groups of children were working together independently with a clear purpose. Towards the end of the day Cameron in Year 3 came to my office and shared a great piece of story writing with me - his handwriting was amazing and he used lots of good punctuation - well done!!