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Wednesday 23 September 2009

Descriptions of Greece

Leon in the Later Years Primary has been working hard to improve his writing. Below are some examples of his fantastic descriptions.




Standing there, I could see a stunning ancient Greek temple. The sun shone down onto the tall stone pillars, creating huge dark shadows. Tourists were like tiny ants gathering on its golden steps.







Peering over the edge of a cliff, I can see a beautiful view below. The shinning sea, was as blue as the sky above. The land below looked like clay models. I can just make out there is a wreck of an old battered boat left on the beach shore.

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