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Sunday 19 October 2008

Y5/6P Poetry

The following group poem was produced after our lesson on personification, metaphor and similes.

SUN

I am the sun,
I burn away the darkness
With my blazing spirit.
The planets are my children
Surrounding me day and night.

I am a flower without any petals.
I am a clock without hands.
I am a face, gleaming with light.
I am a balloon, high up in the sky.
I am the one who gives you light.

Callum, Sam, Charlotte, Rhianna.

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